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“When most people hear the term
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is the study of places, landscapes, environments, and people, and how they have affected each other over time to become what it is today. It combines natural sciences (physical
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and in order to discover the mystery of life there’s nothing better than becoming a geographer ACADEMIC BACKGROUND: I am Taniya Choudhury. I have completed my schooling from Nayabazar High School. I scored 79% (2011) in my secondary examination and I have taken Arts as my subjects in 11th, 12th standards and secured 82% in the Intermediate Examination (2013).
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Honours from
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College
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covering wide areas of interests.
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learned the basics of Physical and human
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along with handling weather and levelling instruments. In the
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performed a group work on ‘Population Dynamics and Socio-Demographic profile of Toto Community in Totopara’ under the supervision of my professor. There I was qualified with 62.25% (2016). Afterwards, my performance assured me a seat in the
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in the
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of North Bengal. I had to submit two individual projects during the 2nd and the 4th semester. These are, ‘Project Report on Land Capability Classification of Temi Tarku Block by USDA Method’ and ‘Morphology and Terrain Analysis of Rimbi Chu Basin’ respectively, where I
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degree from ‘The
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Bengal
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of Teachers’ Training,
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Planning and Administration’ (2020) as well. Now, again I would like to pursue my Master’s in
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from
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of Melbourne;
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pandemic situation. During the 3rd semester of my post-graduation (2017), I took
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Congress, which was organised by the government of
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Bengal and received an outstanding
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award for the
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‘Spatio-Temporal Variability and Trends of Rainfall by South-
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Monsoon over North Bengal’ and
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2018,
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related to landslide.
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presented my
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based on climate change in the National Seminar on CLIMSES organised by Bangiyo Bhugol Mancha in collaboration with
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College
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(2020). A webinar was attended by me, which was initiated by the ‘International Scientific Conference- Dendro-ecology, Forest Management and Reforestation: theoretical and applied aspects" (Ufa, Russia on 5-6 October, 2020) and published a
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paper
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in Mahananda
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Sanctuary’ in the international journal ‘Ecobiotech’ (
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: A Retrospect during the Period of Covid-19 Pandemic’. As soon as I decided to pursue my Master’s in Australia, I realized the need to improve my communication and language skills as
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Bengal: Sandakphu (11,930 ft). I believe all of these co-curricular activities instilled immense confidence in me and had a chance of improving my creativity, critical thinking, leadership capabilities and communication skills to a great extent. COMMUNITY SERVICE: Personally, I reckon, helping others is the best way to help myself.
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2017. There, I had organised and participated in number of seminars to educate local residents about the importance of preserving ecosystem and
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pandemic situation we’ve assisted some forest villagers by supplying daily commodities, in the outskirts of
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. Individually
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for a voluntary participation in the ‘Tea Smile Project’, in collaboration with the students of
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of Hiroshima, where I represented my state, especially Darjiling, as it is known as the leading tea producer. Volunteering my time boosts my energy, happiness, health and sense of well-being. WHAT INTEREST ME I was inspired to commit to a future in
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Survey at
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Bengal, which was based on quality of
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and literacy ratio associated with the socio-economic status of the people residing in different states of India. After publishing their report when I was going through that, it ignited a passion inside me to resolve the issues in a sustainable manner.
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