In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In present. My country has a lot of
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the houses. Because problem from the lower economies and the social society and the
politices
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politics
. Old
house
and new
house
are
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for each people. I think
history
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the history
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of
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is better than building
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a house
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. Because
old
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house
has a many memory for
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a member
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in the
house
. When I was young I live in
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the old
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house
. With
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in
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the
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my room has a signature pen and a lot of cartoon
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with my brother and sister. I can remember it. We live in one room and one bed. We are
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.
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, I think
old
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the old
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house
is wanted by conservative people so much. It is many
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price. Because older people produced the
house
by wood with high skill worker carpenter. Example In my village near my
house
, A journalist was seller his
house
. He got 50,000,000 Thai Bath. Because the
house
make
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by expensive wood so can not find in present. Today, Some wood can not use for
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to
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a house
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house
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. It is illegal. So, In
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long time,
Older
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the Older
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house
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houses
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have many value prices more than
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a new
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house
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. If you have old houses when you do not want
it
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you can make money, But If you have
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house
If you bored
you
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house
,
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when you buy you got lower prices. It is about history from something
has
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increased sharply value
by
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time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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