Some people believe that scientists have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, think that the influence of politicians is greater. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It has been argued that politicians have a great impact on society.
Although
it is true in some context
, I believe that scientists are the real influencers in most cases.
There are several reasons why the people in politics can influence Fix the agreement mistake
contexts
community
. They are public figures and Add an article
the community
a community
that is
why can help in solving domestic issues
. With resources, funds and power given
to them Add the auxiliary verb
were given
from
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by
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the government
a government
government
they can help maintain the local infrastructure. Different resources can be allocated from them to build schools, colleges, universities and parks which can help the community. Most of these tasks Add a comma
,government
however
are local
not global. Another reason is that because most of them are good speakers they can spread awareness regarding important Add the comma(s)
,local
issues
. By highlighting key issues
of society, they can help people by starting a campaign in order to solve any issue. In Pakistan, the
prime minister Imran Khan identified the issue of global warming and air pollution and started a billion-tree plantation campaign. Under his leadership about a billion trees have been planted in three years and the topic of environmental preservation is now a mandatory subject in Correct article usage
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syllabus
.
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the syllabus
Scientist
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Scientists
however
are
the key influencers globally. Change the verb form
is
Firstly
, they are working day and night especially
in Add the comma(s)
,especially
health
care Correct article usage
the health
department
to serve and save millions all around the world. In Fix the agreement mistake
departments
recent
COVID pandemic, scientists have provided the world with Correct article usage
the recent
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the vaccine
a vaccine
vaccine
in record shortest time, Fix the agreement mistake
vaccines
thus
saving millions of lives. Secondly
, over centuries they have sacrificed their lives, comfort and families in order to make discoveries which
are now considered a structural component of society. Mobile phones, Correct pronoun usage
that
internet
, cars and machinery are a few examples Correct article usage
the internet
through
they have helped the world to become a global village in which we are living comfortably.
In conclusion, politicians are influencing the local communities by solving domestic Correct your spelling
though
issues
and spreading awareness, I am of the opinion that scientists have served globally in terms of health care and discoveries.Submitted by nailaheramedhat on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite