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Some working parents think that childcare centers provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some
parents
 would argue that better
care
 can be provided to their
children
 by
child
care
centers
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,
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where as
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 other working
parents
 would say that
grandparents
 can take better
care
 of their grandchildren. I believe that
grandparents
 are
best
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to care
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caretakers
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care takers
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 for
children
.
Child
care
centers
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centres
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 might be considered a better option in some cases. One of
such
 instances is
nonavailability
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the nonavailability
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 of close family members
for example
,
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 if they are living far away, or in some cases not willing to take
this
 responsibility. Another beneficial aspect of
day
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daycare
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care
center
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 that might be taken into account is its general environment.
Children
 can enjoy the company of one another. They can play and eat together,
hence
 becoming better in social interactions.
However
, I am of the belief that close family members especially
grandparents
 are the best
care
 providers for a
child
.
Firstly
,
children
 will get familiar with the importance of family values in their presence. Owing to their vast experience,
children
 are able to learn the importance of respecting elders,
concept
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 of sharing and the idea of differentiating right from wrong. I am a working parent myself and I leave my son with his grandmother. She handles him extremely well. He is two years of age and even at
this
 young age, he is aware of the significance of family values.
Secondly
, the most beneficial aspect of
grandparent
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a grandparent
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 being a
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caretaker
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care taker
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caretaker
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 is that the
children
 are safe.
Grandparents
 have
natural
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a natural
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 bond of love and can never harm a
child
, whereas a lot of assault cases have been reported by
parents
 against various
child
care
centers
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till
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 date. In conclusion, while
child
care
centers
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 can be considered beneficial in some instances, I believe that considering the family values and safety of
children
, they should be left with their
grandparent
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grandparents
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 if their
parents
 are having demanding jobs.
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