You are going to have a party. you would like to invite a friend who lives in a city that is a long way from your home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter . explain why you are having the party . describe your plans for the party . suggested how your friend can travel to the party and where he/she can stay

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Dear Tiffany, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am excited to tell

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a news

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you

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which is I arrange one small

party

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this

weekend

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on Sanday

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Sanday

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Sunday

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at 5.30. I would like to invite you

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party

. You know my marriage is

week,

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, I like to give a small bachelor

party

for all my friends including you. I hope you will attend with us. I arranged a different type of celebration at

party

time,

party

venue is

beach

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hotel and the rooms will be fully decorated

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rose flowers and our couple photos.

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, night full day we will drink wines, and I order the best delicious food in my place. I know you are staying

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long distance

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than

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party

location so I can arrange the travel and accommodation

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you. I can send a taxi

anad

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and

you can travel

with

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comfortable

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me comfortable

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bacause

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because

I decided to send

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AC taxi and I will book

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one

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single room with

ensuite

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bathroom amenity at the Green star hotel. I would be grateful if you

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joined

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joint

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with us. I look forward to receiving your response as soon as possible. Thank you. Best regards, Reetha.

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200 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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