In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

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In the modern civilized years, as
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had become more socially and economically involved with community family duties changed and became more equally divided between men and
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.
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essay is going to cover these changes and explain why it is a positive trend.
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with, it is well-known that
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became more active in societies they had less
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to spend at home. meaning that as they became involved with outside works and got occupied in offices and other working places they had less
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to clean and cook as they use to have.
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had let
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come up with a new system to take care of their family as well as be active in other places.
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, before,
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had to choose between their job and their child but in newly-built
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,structures they can manage and divide their free
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with their partner and both be able to work as well as take care of the child. To continue,
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's duty used to be taking care of the house, cleaning and cooking. nowadays because most
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live in urbanized environments, they have direct access to food and cleaning services so they can outsource these tasks to people outside the family.
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can provide
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for
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to pursue their other interests which can make the family more stable and the society juster.
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, in a family where both parents are not occupied with the house ,chores they can spend more
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educating themselves, working or simply spending
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with their family all these activities have direct or indirect impacts on society as
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are primitive cells of civilizations. To conclude, it is mentioned that as the community had some changes and
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role in cities became more visible and valued family duties changed as well and became more equal and just both for
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and men.
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,
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trend may have some drawbacks as well the merits seem to strongly over-shine the demerits.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Family structure
  • Modern family
  • Extended family
  • Nuclear family
  • Same-sex parent families
  • Breadwinner
  • Caregiving responsibilities
  • Family dynamics
  • Globalization
  • Economic shifts
  • Migration
  • Child-free lifestyles
  • Cohabitation
  • Traditional marriage
  • Perceptions
  • Homemaker
  • Communication
  • Shared activities
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