Recently, full-time
education
has attracted widespread discussion in the public, and some
people
advocate that young
people
should receive full-time
education
at least until they are 18 years old. For
this
view, I totally agree with it, because
education
is an essential part of
people
.
It is true that there are some drawbacks for some young
people
to receive full-time
education
before they are adults.
Firstly
, some teenagers are not good at studying and they think it is a waste of money and time to stay in school all day.
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adolescents, having received basic skills and common
knowledge
,
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can work in factories
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require less professional
knowledge
to earn a living.
Secondly
, it is difficult for some poor families to support all their children in school for a long time, which will heavy their economic burden. In fact, maybe a short-term skill training that enables these young
people
working in factories is the appropriate way to improve the quality of living of themselves and their family.
In spite of these demerits, I believe that young
people
could better receive full-time
education
until they are at least 18 years old. Primarily, as
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social and science develop, young
people
need to learn more theoretical
knowledge
than ever before to adapt to modern society.
For example
, since a lot of work skills will become outdated in a few years,
people
need to mastery enough theoretical
knowledge
to make them
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the ability of self-learning in their life
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exclusively.
Additionally
,
although
full-time
education
will bring about some financial pressure, they can obtain a decent job and return in the future when they become well-educated
people
.
In a nutshell,
although
there are some difficulties for some young
people
to receive full-time
education
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least time, I believe that the young
people
and our society will benefit from adequate full
education
.