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in their advertising, business nowdays usually emphasise that that their products are new in some way why is this like? do you think it is positive or negative development?

#business #nowdays #emphasise #products #development
In the twentieth century,
company
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companies
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 and
corporation
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corporations
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 attach
to
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a
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great importance to
publicize
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 their
products
. The advertisement aimed to persuade
people
 to purchase the
products
 by emphasizing
in
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brand
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a brand
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 new
feature
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features
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 that special
goods
 have. I believe
this
 approach has both positive and negative
aspect
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aspects
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 on industry and
people
, so in
this
essay
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 I will discuss
pros
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the pros
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 and cons of
this
 type
publicity
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of publicity
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. In terms of
drawback
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the drawback
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 of introducing
products
ax
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 a modern and cutting-edged, the effect on the consumerism should be taken into consideration. To illustrate, the majority of
people
 have a tendency to use
of
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leading-edged
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leading-edge
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products
 and technology even if the old tools
is
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are
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 still effective.
This
 means that the organizations focus on advancement and
state-of-the art
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characteristic
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characteristics
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 to exhort customers the needs for these
goods
.
Consequently
, the old version of
goods
 will be dumped as litter,
as a
result
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this
 would cause
the
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 large amount of trash adding to previous pollution problems. All in all, the publicity by emphasizing
on
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new features correlates with consumerization and litter problem.
On the other hand
, organizations by informing
people
 about new options of
device
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devices
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, give them
great
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 opportunity to
selecting
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products
 based on their needs whereas
people
 in the past, did not have access to full information about gadgets.
Moreover
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 the
state-of-the- art
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 features which has been added to new brands bring more convenience and
prosperous
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 for customers
,
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 because these are equipped
by
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with
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 modern technology and tools.
For example
, modern
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smartphones
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smart phones
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smartphones
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 have leading-edge technology for photography which able
people
 to telephone and camera
as
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same
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the same
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 time.
However
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 in the previous years, individuals had to carry out heavy photography tools to take photos from their trip.
Thus
, new qualities and hyping those bring more comfort to our life. To conclude, the new publicities focus on the brand new qualities that would cause the increasing trend in the consumerization,
however
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 it can have
worthwhile
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a worthwhile
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 influence on the prosperity of
people
. If the promoter just
use
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this
 approach without considering
comfort
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the comfort
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 of
people
 in their new
goods
, we will see just increasing consumerism.
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