Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Climate change has always been an important issue across the world. In
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concept, multiple environmental problems emerge as a warning caution to humankind. In which, numerous people argue that the extinction of some plants and animals species should be prioritized;
however
, others claim for
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serious problem in
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scenario. My essay will explain both mentioned sides, followed by my personal idea. On the one hand, the vanish of multiple creatures has been an urgent effect of bad adverse
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from climate change. Because each kind of
plants
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or animals
work
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as a link in a tight food chain, only one broken point would lead to
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potential complete destruction of all other kinds.
For example
, oceanic coral in Vietnam is on the verge of
extiction
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extinction
due to pollution,
this
could result in the
lackage
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lack
leakage
of food for local fish,
then
their vanish is unavoidable.
Hence
, global protection should apply in
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environment
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to prevent species loss.
On the other hand
, humankind nowadays
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actually threatened by much more serious troubles
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by long term environmental destruction. Since our earth has been warmer and warmer every
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, some ancient viruses may be unleased in permanent ice-berg.
For instance
, scientists found a movement of a prehistoric virus in Antarctic ice-berg, they predicted
this
unknown creature could spread to local oceanic fish
first
,
then
cause harm to
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in an unpredictable way.
Thus
, people in modern
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may face
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unexpected dangers despite the
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development of science. In conclusion, species extinction and other crucial environmental issues have been put in
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discussion. My perspective supports
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the
second
side of
this
topic that there are more dangerous hidden troubles than what we could obviously watch
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naked eyes, 2019 pandemic is a typical example. As the consequence, proper preparation for
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has
to begin
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all over the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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