Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian rilef during natural disaster.Do you agree or disagree?

A commentator considers that developed
countries
should provide humanitarian aid to underdeveloped
countries
during natural emergencies.
This
essay agrees that it is our duty as humans to help poor
countries
in a natural disaster.
firstly
,Rich
countries
should provide basic
support
to poor
countries
because they are much better than developing
countries
in various sectors
such
as health care, science , transport and equipment so on.
For example
, During covid-19 in 2020
India
do not have
such
a storge health care system in
India
and
people
do have enough money to get expensive medicine. so in
this
pandemic
time
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rich
countries
such
as Canada and American come forward to
support
India
to bring covid vaccine dose and to save
people
life that makes a good bond between both
nations
.
secondly
, Rich
nations
support
other
countries
during natural urgency ought to they can experiment with their new equipment and products to secure
people
lives like their new medicine. after that , if they get success in
this
then
they can establish some new business in poor
countries
that
also
help in boost their economy and
also
provide employment to the low-level country community.
for instance
, during
last
year flood in Mumbai
India
, Canada famous company provide emergency kits to
people
during disaster situations
that
is
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so popular in other's
countries
too because it saves the lives of
ofthousands
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thousands
of thousands
people
. The conclusion is that in my view developed
nations
should
support
poor
nations
during pandemic situations to survive in their hard time that creates good relationships and gives moral
support
to underdeveloped
countries
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • humanitarian assistance
  • natural disaster
  • wealthy nations
  • poorer countries
  • relief
  • moral obligation
  • resources
  • effective
  • global stability
  • image
  • reputation
  • long-term recovery
  • resilience building
  • collaboration
  • mutual benefits
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