Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian rilef during natural disaster.Do you agree or disagree?
A commentator considers that developed
countries
should provide humanitarian aid to underdeveloped countries
during natural emergencies.This
essay agrees that it is our duty as humans to help poor countries
in a natural disaster.
firstly
,Rich countries
should provide basic support
to poor countries
because they are much better than developing countries
in various sectors such
as health care, science , transport and equipment so on. For example
, During covid-19 in 2020 India
do not have such
a storge health care system in India
and people
do have enough money to get expensive medicine. so in this
pandemic time
rich Add a comma
,time
countries
such
as Canada and American come forward to support
India
to bring covid vaccine dose and to save people
life that makes a good bond between both nations
.
secondly
, Rich nations
support
other countries
during natural urgency ought to they can experiment with their new equipment and products to secure people
lives like their new medicine. after that , if they get success in this
then
they can establish some new business in poor countries
that also
help in boost their economy and also
provide employment to the low-level country community. for instance
, during last
year flood in Mumbai India
, Canada famous company provide emergency kits to people
during disaster situations that
is
so popular in other's Change the verb form
are
countries
too because it saves the lives of ofthousands
Correct your spelling
thousands
of thousands
people
.
The conclusion is that in my view developed nations
should support
poor nations
during pandemic situations to survive in their hard time that creates good relationships and gives moral support
to underdeveloped countries
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