Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the midst of
this
technology-driven global world, modern arts play an important role in the day to day life.Modern arts are
also
a language of souls,it speaks a lot.Admittedly,some of the modern
artists
get more value for their
work
however
, the rest of
them
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fight to exist.Government authorities should take necessary action to solve
this
scenario. I totally agree with
this
opinion.
First
of all,let me clarify my point.Obviously,all the
artists
are not having the same capability,some are excellent at their
work
some are just average.
However
,if a person makes his carrier on it,at least he could manage his daily needs from
this
income.For
this
,the corresponding department should make a minimum value for their creatures and they should make sure that it won't be going below the minimum price.
Thus
,from
this
I mean to tell that,it will help to get a minimum wage for all
artists
. Apparently,all
artists
are not getting enough exposure to explore their
works
.Ostensibly, the public has a mentality that they will get artworks from famous
artists
only,even though there are good
works
by others,
therefore
the government should conduct an exhibition monthly basis to exhibit all
artists
work
under one roof by hiding the
artist
name from their creature.
Hence
, people get more options to choose and those
works
are impressed by folks they just buy them.
As a result
,good
works
get paid well.
For instance
,
last
year I went to
such
kind of exhibition with my friend even though modern art was not my cup of tea.After entering there I liked some modern art and I bought it.I didn't know who has created it till I paid the bill
,
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after payment only they disclose the
artist
name,surprisingly it was a new young
artist
's
work
.That I kept in my living room.Those who visit my home really like that
work
and ask me about it. To sum up, everything that I have been explained so far,In our society all modern
artists
are not paid well for their
works
,people tend to buy products from
famous
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artist
only,
therefore
, some
artist
who even has excellent creatures are not getting enough attention or payment.
This
is really an unfair situation.By putting a minimum wage guarantee for all modern artworks can solve
this
issue.
This
action should be taken by the government authority with some other steps(by promoting all modern arts).
Therefore
all
artists
have a chance to publish their
work
to the public and get a good earning for their job.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • income disparity
  • struggling artists
  • market demand
  • public preference
  • government support
  • grants
  • funding
  • exhibitions
  • cultural wealth
  • societal benefits
  • market dynamics
  • government intervention
  • art market
  • public taste
  • private investment
  • balanced artistic community
  • financial assistance
  • creative industry
  • artistic merit
  • economic sustainability
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