You recently returned from oversea by air and left a valuable item on the plane. Write a letter to the airline manager. In your letter .Describe the item you left behind .Say why it is important to you .Explain what you would like the airline manager to do Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir, I hope

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letter finds you in the best of spirits and radiant health. I am writing

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letter to let you know that I boarded one of your flights MHZ56

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week from Tokyo to Delhi and I accidently left my Pizo Micro-motor

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when I landed at Delhi Airport. I am an Oral Surgeon and went to Tokyo for a Dental Conference as a guest speaker. I perform oral surgeries on

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basis and the equipment I left is used frequently to do bone cuttings and bone graft placements during procedures.

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, it is a

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expensive machine, which I got after many efforts, because of its superior quality and accuracy. I have been using it for eight years and it helped me a lot to enhance my

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. I hope you will understand my situation. I would urge you to kindly find my valuable item and courier it to me. I am ready to pay for the courier cost as well. I hope you will look into the matter personally and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jatinder.

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coherence cohesion

Consider breaking the letter into clearer paragraphs to better separate the description of the item, its importance, and the requested action.

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Add a little more detail about how you discovered the item was missing and emphasize why it is irreplaceable.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a good balance of courteous language used in the greeting and closing.

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The letter maintains a suitable formal tone throughout, appropriate for writing to an airline manager.

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The importance of the item is clearly communicated, making the need for its return understandable.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

187 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

valuable item
left behind
overhead compartment
flight attended
identifiable features
lost and found
retrieve
significant
service provided
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