Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In an era of information and communication,

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every

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some

news

are

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in making around the globe,

news

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imperative for making decisions, which may be political ,

economical

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etc. It

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that

radion

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is the best way to get information

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as others believe that TV

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the purpose better. I will discuss both

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aspects in

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my opinion in conclusion.

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with,

radio

better

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medium for information for several reasons.

Firstly

, its portability makes it easy to carry while travelling.

Hence

this

device is used in almost all types of vehicles for entertainment and

news

Secondly

radio

connectivity is available to almost all the remote location of a country, where all other devices

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to operate.

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instruments are used by the Indian military in the high range mountains areas, where only radion connectivity is available for

news

and communication.

Furthermore

device

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is affordable as

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to TV ,

hence

, it is used by

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For example

developing

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countries like India, for

news

almost 60% of the population is dependent on

radio

for

news

, as per

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recent research.

However

on the other hand

, many believe TV is

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better way

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to collect

informations

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as it

provide

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both visuals and audio.

Furthermore

, many

news

contain

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data and graphs which can only

be understand

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through watching them along with

listening

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Additionally

, people have

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the privilege

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of watching the

concern

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person, around whom the

news

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made. To conclude, both aspects have their own supporters . But, if I consider the facts logically, I strongly believe the

radio

better

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a better

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way for acquiring

news

due to its affordability, connectivity and portability.

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283 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Complete response

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