some people believe that it's good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research,Businesses and academic worlds. Others believe that some information is so important and valuable to be shared freely. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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A group of people agree about sharing all of the
information
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which they have about science or business with
others
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and they maintain that it could be a good idea. While
others
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would say that
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giving some
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to
others
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is fine, most of them are much more important to everybody could access to them without paying. For me, even though some of them must be hidden from the public, it's a really proper decision to share different knowledge with
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. Sharing
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with
others
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has several benefits.
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, it might give a chance to scientists to discover something new by using them. in some cases by putting some hypothesis together, something different might come to hand and it's a huge development in different types of sciences.
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,
students
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can help each other by doing
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in a school. the intelligent can share sort of knowledge about their studies with less smart ones. So, just as clever
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can review their lessons, poor ones can learn them either.
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, in my country, it is so common that teacher categorizes
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into groups that have clever and some weak
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so they can study together. It is often said that some
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are so important and substantial which is not right to publish them with
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.
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as, political or economic's
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of a country. It's not logical to publish them with population. It can make some issues for governments and it has a really harmful effect if other countries use
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data
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to attack them.
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, there are too many people who don't deserve to get some
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in any area. they might just misuse
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or blow them and after all of that do not even appreciate it. So, it might be wasting time and energy to explain even a single word to them. In conclusion, publishing
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has some positive effects not only for the giver but
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for the person who receives it. people can avoid sharing important news and the government can help to stop
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process.
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, they can take care of the audience and make sure how grateful are they and after that give those to them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaboration
  • innovation
  • transparency
  • accountability
  • unfair advantages
  • misuse
  • valuable
  • protected
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  • confidentiality
  • progress
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