Write about the following topic. Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Teachers play an inevitable role in the student's life. So, globally swapping of the
students
have its pros and cons. There are for and against everything but I choose to look at the positives. The
first
point of advantage is that the
students
from developing
countries
like Pakistan, Afghanistan, India prefer to get education from developed
countries
likes Canada, the United Kingdom as their literacy rate is high as compared to their
countries
. And
this
way, the
students
going for student exchange program gets to have more knowledge.
Secondly
, they become more mature in their early life because they have to leave their homes and
this
results in great strength whether it's mentally or physically.
For example
,
students
in LUMS form swapped country scheme performs well in their undergraduates and graduates program better than the local
students
. The disadvantage of
this
includes the cultural shock. When the
students
in their early life leave their
countries
.
As a result
, they become part of other
countries
and are exposed to their unfamiliar customs and different beliefs which could lead them to conflicts and misunderstanding.
Moreover
, when they adapt
living
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without their family they opt for permanent residency in that particular country.
For example
, there are 13000
students
in Australia waiting for their permanent residency. Connecting all the dots to a single point that everything has its strength and weakness but looking at the brighter side
students
in developing nations are getting a chance to study abroad and explore their options.
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Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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