You have had a problem with your next-door neighbour. You have not been able to speak to your neighbour about this. Write a letter to this neighbour. In you letter - explain the problem - suggest a solution - say what action you will take if the situation does not improve.

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Dear Aslam, I hope you are fine .I am writing

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letter as it's been more than a month that I am not able to talk to you in person.Since our official timings do not allow us to speak because of the mismatching of our timings.

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this

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time I will not let our shifting duties hinder the issue.

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, bringing the

car

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parking issue to your knowledge.arose

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month when your driver parked the

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just outside my main gate. As your kind self knew that I have to drop my son sharp 7.00AM for school.

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,The driver parked the

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that made him late for school.

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, the problem does not finish here, despite instructing him a couple of times he still parks the vehicle at the same spot.

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, I

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told him politely even though I scolded him later but he seems to put his ear on air.

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, it's my humble request to guide him

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.If he doesn't behave himself.

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,there is a huge

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parking area just at the corner of the road.Everyone parks their vehicle there .And If I find him standing in front of my vicinity again I will launch a complaint against him formally to the local council. I hope you will solve

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matter as our neighbourhood is quite old ,

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I know you will keep your words

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time as you use to with. Thanks, Yours faithfully, ZF

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

237 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers and books because they will able to read everything they want in online without paying. to what extend do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does advantage outweigh the disadvantages?

The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. What extent Do you Agree or Disagree ??