Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Say why a driving license is advantageous Recomend a drving school Give any extra guidance/tips

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Dear Nara, Hope you're doing well. It was great to hear from you recently and I'm thrilled that you have decided to participate in a driving course. I believe it's

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importance

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for everyone to learn

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skill

besause

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because

it makes our lives easier and it is more convenient to turn around with a private car rather than using public transport like

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metro

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. If you have not chosen

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driving school, I highly recommend Confident Drivers

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Hillton

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Hilton

Street. It is

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reputed

for its quality service and professional staff all around the town.

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, it's the same place

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have

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completed my training and got my license

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my first attempt. The best advice that I have for you is that practice is essential and the only means of becoming a professional driver, so first learn the rules

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and don't be afraid of risks. I am sure you'll be a good driver soon. wish you all the best. Take care Tina

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language

Make sure to proofread for spelling errors, such as 'besause' and 'reputated'.

structure

Consider organizing your thoughts more logically, such as having each paragraph focus on a single idea.

tone

You maintained a friendly and encouraging tone throughout the letter.

details

You provided personal experience with the recommended driving school, which adds credibility to your suggestion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

166 words

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

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