Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Artificial

intelligence

is predicted to be much better than human beings. While many argue that it is beneficial, others believe it will cause a lot of problems.

This

essay will discuss both views, but my opinion leans towards the latter point because of the computers’ repercussions t

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the job market. On the one hand, the advent of artificial

intelligence

is advantageous as it curtails w

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burden on humans. It is able to help people with some work related to calculations which require a lot of time and carefulness. These days, a large number of companies are making use of computers in calculating their important information,

such

as the salary of each employer, which is e

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and often takes hours to do.

Therefore

, thanks to computer technology, the efficiency in the calculation process h

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been significantly improved and it

also

lessens the need for a plethora of workers.

On the other hand

, the advancements of computer technology r

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in the increasing possibility of unemployment. To be specific, technology is becoming much more modern and intelligent so they tend to replace humans in certain aspects.

For instance

, Amazon has opened many shops which no longer have any workers and completely use artificial

intelligence

in management and administration. That means a lot of l

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have been made redundant, especially those who are less skilled.

As a result

, it is likely to cause a higher level of poverty and put more pressure on government funding spent on the poor. In conclusion,

although

the advent of computers provides humans with convenience in working,

this

tendency is considered a

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detrimental phenomenon as it poses a threat to people’s job opportunities. From my perspective, artificial

intelligence

just should be used as support machines

instead

of substitutes for human roles.