In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this ? How can people research this ?

These days,
History
is one of the most important factors in parts of people's lives. If a question about finding
about
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of their residents is addressed, it will be challenging for us to reach our decision on
this
controversial issue. The following essay will analyze the reasons and provide the way people research
this
as well. The two main reasons
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finding out about
history
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of their
house
are faith and construction.
Firstly
, some people believe that there are holy things in their
house
before they moved.
For example
, my parents will have Thai traditional to pray holy things before they move into the new
house
.
In addition
, they want to keep their buildings like new. So knowing the construction methods and materials used to build by
previous
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owner
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is better
to
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them.
For example
, my uncle always finds out to the previous owner to ask them what materials
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built
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because he
prefer
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the floor made
form
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tile
that is
easier to clean than wood.
However
, the residents could use various methods to research the
history
.
For example
, if you need to know the construction, you could ask
previous
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owner.
Moreover
, we can find more information
throughout
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the internet and company built
this
building. In conclusion, finding out about the
history
of the building could help them to identify the background of their
house
and keep the
house
in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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