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write to a professor

Dear Professor Hassanzadeh, I am writing to express my interest in working in your
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 group as a
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 student. I earned my master’s degree in Reservoir
Management
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 at the
Petroleum
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 University of Technology, Tehran,
Iran
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, in March 2018. My bachelor’s degree is in Chemical Engineering at the Ferdowsi University of Mashhad,
Iran
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, in August 2013. The title of my master’s thesis is “Technical and
economic improvement
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 of the
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gas recovery process through
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Gas Recovery Process Through
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 the
integration
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 of
reservoir
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 and
surface operation models
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Surface Operation Models
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 of a
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gas field
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Gas Field
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.” During my graduate study, I acquainted myself with software packages including HYSYS, Eclipse, and IPM (integrated production
management
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) to simulate production in
gas
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 condensate reservoirs, designing processes for
gas
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 purifications.
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, I applied QUE$TOR and Excel for the economic evaluation of technical and financial scenarios. My master’s outcome was a paper presented at the 12th
Iran
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 International Energy Conference in 2018.
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 to these, I have been selected to start
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 in the Ministry of
Petroleum
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 of
Iran
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 to identify, gather, and interpret the main factors in a Master Development Plan (MDP) of the
petroleum
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 fields. In
this
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 project, I investigated more than 2500 pages of Iranian oil fields MDPs, and the outcome is the draft of integrated data for future
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 toward MDP for evaluation. The experience of
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 project absolutely will help me for the position that needs screening different methods for EOR. As an M.Sc.
of
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 reservoir
management
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, I am studying geology and economy and
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chemical engineer whose knowledge is firm in chemicals. I want to continue my study in
gas
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 process and injection, especially CO2 EOR techniques. In that matter, I found your
research
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 on sustainable process design and assessment for syngas-fermentation-based products exciting and relevant to my background and
research
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 interest. Considering your
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 topic and background, I am confident that I can be a suitable fit for
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 position in your
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 group. I enclosed my CV for your review. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Masud R. Kaykanloo Department of Economics and Energy
Management
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Petroleum
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 University of Technology (PUT)

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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