You have recently moved to a different house, and you want to give the news to an English-speaking friend who lives in another country. Write a letter to this English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

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Hello Saya, As I discussed with you earlier , I have been moved to the new flat which was located nearby my university. Moving to a new location is not an easy job but I have done it without losing anything except some of my shoes. There were several reasons why I moved from my previous house to

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new home . My old apartment was far from the university which I studied and limited options for transportation as well .

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the environment was peaceful and silent , I could not order easily for my breakfast and dinner . As I told you before , my new flat was close to the university and there were several shops for my meals.

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, a new MRT line has been started the

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couple of weeks ago and now transportation was

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convenient. So, please come to my new room if you have time in the

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summer holidays . I hope you could not miss the chance . Yours sincerely , Thomas

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

172 words

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