Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior.Other disagree and think that the host country should wecome cultural difference.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals claim that tourists visiting other countries should follow the traditions and

habits

of that

country

.Whereas,

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of

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are opposing the idea and argue that the

visitors

should continue with their

culture

as they embrace the diversity that

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between the values.From my

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tourist should continue

practicing

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their

norms

so that they do not part from

it

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and pass

it

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to the

next

generation.

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cultural diversity

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exist

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across the world that tourism can carry along.

Firstly

,if the

visitors

are allowed to continue

praticing

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practising

their

culture

it will make them feel recognised,welcomed and appreciated.

Moreover

, it will provide a platform for other people to learn different ways of doing things.

Secondly

,the

visitors

are able to pass the

norms

and conduct to their siblings in case they are accompanying their parents to the new destinations.To illustrate

this

,the adage

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says teach the children the way you want them to grow and they will not part from it.

Therefore

,

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continuing

with the tradition and

habits

not only offer a learning platform for different

culture

but

also

it

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ensures the passing down of cultural values to

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generation.

On the other hand

,the host countries to the

visitors

do not always allow them to

practice

their cultural

norms

,

instead

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they should copy the existing

culture

and

habits

because most

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locals

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feel that they will water down their prevailing

habits

by acquiring a different norm.

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Nevertheless

,others feel offended by

visitors

practicing

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their customs because

that is

not their home

country

.

For example

,Maasai

culture

is only

synonimous

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synonymous

to Kenyans and trying to

practice

this

culture

in a different

country

will not go well with others.

Thus

,some people do not allow the

practice

of verse cultures in their

country

. In conclusion,

visitors

should be allowed to

practice

their own traditional

norms

and

habits

.while the local population should not copy the

visitors

as

this

might derail their

culture

too.People have diversities in cultures that should be embraced.