Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior.Other disagree and think that the host country should wecome cultural difference.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals claim that tourists visiting other countries should follow the traditions and

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of that

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.Whereas,

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are opposing the idea and argue that the

visitors

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should continue with their

culture

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as they embrace the diversity that

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between the values.From my

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tourist should continue

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their

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so that they do not part from

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and pass

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to the

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generation.

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cultural diversity

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across the world that tourism can carry along.

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,if the

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are allowed to continue

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practising

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it will make them feel recognised,welcomed and appreciated.

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, it will provide a platform for other people to learn different ways of doing things.

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,the

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are able to pass the

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and conduct to their siblings in case they are accompanying their parents to the new destinations.To illustrate

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says teach the children the way you want them to grow and they will not part from it.

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,

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continuing

with the tradition and

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not only offer a learning platform for different

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but

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ensures the passing down of cultural values to

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generation.

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,the host countries to the

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do not always allow them to

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their cultural

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they should copy the existing

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and

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because most

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feel that they will water down their prevailing

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by acquiring a different norm.

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,others feel offended by

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practicing

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their customs because

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not their home

country

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.

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,Maasai

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is only

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to Kenyans and trying to

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culture

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in a different

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will not go well with others.

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,some people do not allow the

practice

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of verse cultures in their

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. In conclusion,

visitors

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should be allowed to

practice

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their own traditional

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and

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.while the local population should not copy the

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as

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might derail their

culture

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too.People have diversities in cultures that should be embraced.