Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?
Nowadays,
money
plays a very important for basic needs like home ,food, clothes. some people
think that having a lot of money
is a key to happiness
while some think that money
cannot buy happiness
, other things can make people
happy
Everything become so expensive these days that people
have to take loans for buying homes, children's education and for any type of medical emergency. This
causes stress amongst family
and affects their psychological Correct article usage
the family
health
. So many people
think that being wealthy gives future financial security and increases their social status which ultimately gives happiness
. In addition
, Some people
seek happiness
in
buying expensive Change preposition
by
stuffs
like branded clothes, gadgets and luxury cars.so, for them having a lot of Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
money
is a necessity for happiness
. They can plan a vacation anywhere at anytime
or go Replace the word
any time
to
shopping if they feel exhausted from work or if they feel sad. For any medical Change preposition
apply
emergencies
they can opt for expensive treatment without any financial burden. But in seek of Add a comma
,emergencies
happiness
people
now are becoming a part of rat
race which ultimately affect their physical and psychological Correct article usage
a rat
health
However
, there are other things which
can Correct pronoun usage
that
also
give happiness
such
as contentment, loving
and caring family, some good friends to hang out with. Some Correct article usage
a loving
people
remain happy with whatever little they have they enjoy every small occasion with their family and also
involve others by donating food clothes to needy
Correct article usage
the needy
that is
real happiness
for them .In my opinion
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,opinion
money
doesn't matter if a person is lonely or doesn't have a
moral family support. Spending quality time with friends and family gives immense inner peace and Remove the article
apply
happiness
even after a hectic day. In addition
, good health
is also
very important these days which cannot be achieved only through money
. Some deadly diseases cannot be cured by taking expensive treatment so one should not avoid their health
in order to make more money
.
In conclusion, being wealthy doesn't always guarantee happiness
but contentment, good health
and having loving family and friends will. Money
is requisite for living
but for Add an article
a living
wealth
one should not become a part of Add a comma
,wealth
rat
race and ignore other things.Add an article
the rat
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