To improve the job prospects, some people want the secondery schools to spend more time teaching communication and business skills and spend less time teaching history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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last

two or three decades,

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job opportunities

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been changed tremendously than ever before due to

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globalization.

As a result

, communication and business sectors have tons of employment opportunities among the society,

hence

, some think that the secondary schools teach an enormous period of these subject and

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less time to teaching

history

. I strongly agree with

this

statement for the following reasons.

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with, these fields have

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enormous work

chances

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among the

world

. The

top level

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companies are required only these kinds of sectors due to globalization,

thus

, more and more organisation have a chance to

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their companies in another country in order for

employmennt

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employment

chances are increased an enormously than

history

,

therefore

, the

seecondary

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secondary

schools should be taught management and IT related class more time

instead

of

history

subject.

For example

, in

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almost many schools are only taught management

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because they prepare

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their students for

this

competitive

world

and they practice

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the booming industry.

Moreover

,

this

trend can be created more entrepreneurs

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around the

world

when the educational institutions teach

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the

amnagerial

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managerial

skills and entrepreneur development.

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contrast

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history

does not apply

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day-to-day life so the parents should not

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history

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to

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their children

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the secondary level.

For instance

, less than 30% of the schoolboys like to study

history

subject

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around the

world

. Because

history

field is now out of

industry

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the industry

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in

this

modern era. To conclude, technology

anad

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and

business skill courses are given more work opportunities than any other field,

therefore

, some believe that educational

institution

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should be teaching more period for communication and business

skill

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skills

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and takes less time to

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history

.

Therefore

, I strongly agree with

this

statement in the

aboove

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above

-mentioned details. I hope

this

trend gives

an

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enormous job

chances

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to around the

world

in order for reducing the unemployment ratio.