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Successful companies use advertising to make more sales. What can make an advertisement very effective? Do you think this is a bad thing or a good thing for the society?

#companies #sales #advertisement #society
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 US FEEL HAPPY Keeping tabs on the things you feel lucky to have in your life is a great way to boost your mood. In a recent study from psychologists at UC Davis, researchers had 3 groups of volunteers keep weekly journals focused on a single topic. While one
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 wrote about major events that had happened that week, the
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 wrote about hassles they'd experienced, and the
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 wrote about things they were grateful for. Ten weeks later, those in the gratitude-journal
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 reported feeling more optimistic and more satisfied with their lives than those in any of the other groups and reported fewer physical symptoms of discomfort, from runny noses to headaches
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