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the world’s oil in OPEC and non-OPEC countries from 1980 to 2020.

The given bar chart illustrates the information about the production of the world’s
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 in
OPEC
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 and
non-
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OPEC
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countries
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 from 1980 to 2020. The general overview here is that from 1980 to 2000
Non-
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OPEC
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countries
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 produced the most world
oil
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 production, while it is projected that the highest number of world’s
oil
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 from 2010 to 2020 is from
OPEC
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Middle
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 East. According to the chart, it can be seen that from 1980 to 2000
Non-
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OPEC
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countries
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 produced
oil
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 around 12
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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, whereas the
OPEC
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Middle
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 East
countries
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 indicated only 2
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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. There was a significant movement between 2000 and 2010, the number of
Non-
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OPEC
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 National rose dramatically to almost 20
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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.
Similarly
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,there was a similar increase in the
OPEC
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Middle
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 East nation, rising to approximately 8
barrels
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 every single
day
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. It is interesting to note that there was a figure of approximately 13
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 that produced by the other
OPEC
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 nation which never had before. From 2010 to 2020. The projected figure for the
OPEC
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Middle
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 East states will experience a remarkable increase of over 15
million
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barrels
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 of
oil
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 production.
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,there will be a similar trend upward in the other
OPEC
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 states and
Non-
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OPEC
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 states, rising to around 16
million
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barrels
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 and 17
million
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barrels
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 respectively in the same period.

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