Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary because students can study well at home through the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that

students

can

study

efficiently and effectively through distance education at home

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so that there is no need for

schools

. I tend to disagree with

this

statement,

although

there are advantages

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taking online courses. Undoubtedly, online

study

is beneficial to schoolers. Taking classes on the Internet allows

students

to

study

anytime and anywhere at their own pace.

This

means that

students

are able to stop videos of online courses when they come across

study

problems, and refer to their textbooks or turn to others for help,

such

as

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parents and peers before continuing the videos.

In addition

, for those who want to review distance education is helpful.

This

is because online lessons can be replayed and rewatched

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many times.

However

, I argue that the significance of

schools

should be valued.

First

of all, school is where

students

socialise with others. When taking lessons in a classroom with other members of the class,

students

have chances to have real-time discussions and corporate with their peers by working in a team, through which interpersonal skills of schoolers will be developed and improved.

Furthermore

, teacher supervision will boost

productivity

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of

students

. It is undeniable that there are a great number of information and distractions on the Internet that will steal

students

’ attention when they

study

at home without supervision;

however

, if

students

attend face-to-face classes at

schools

, they will

study

and work under supervision from teachers, which will guarantee

students

pay full attention in lessons. In conclusion, though distance education brings positives to

students

,

schools

play a key role in developing

students

’ social skills and ensuring their productivity. My view is that it is better for schoolers to make

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use of online learning, and at the same time, value the importance of

schools

.