Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary because students can study well at home through the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that

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can

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efficiently and effectively through distance education at home

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so that there is no need for

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. I tend to disagree with

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statement,

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taking online courses. Undoubtedly, online

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is beneficial to schoolers. Taking classes on the Internet allows

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to

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anytime and anywhere at their own pace.

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means that

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are able to stop videos of online courses when they come across

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problems, and refer to their textbooks or turn to others for help,

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parents and peers before continuing the videos.

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, for those who want to review distance education is helpful.

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is because online lessons can be replayed and rewatched

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many times.

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, I argue that the significance of

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should be valued.

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of all, school is where

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socialise with others. When taking lessons in a classroom with other members of the class,

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have chances to have real-time discussions and corporate with their peers by working in a team, through which interpersonal skills of schoolers will be developed and improved.

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, teacher supervision will boost

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. It is undeniable that there are a great number of information and distractions on the Internet that will steal

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’ attention when they

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at home without supervision;

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, if

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attend face-to-face classes at

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, they will

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and work under supervision from teachers, which will guarantee

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pay full attention in lessons. In conclusion, though distance education brings positives to

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,

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play a key role in developing

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’ social skills and ensuring their productivity. My view is that it is better for schoolers to make

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use of online learning, and at the same time, value the importance of

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