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In some cilture, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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In certain nations of the world it's common to tell
young
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 generation that if they work hard and put all their efforts
on
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 their goals, they will achieve anything.There are several benefits and drawbacks of
this
message
 sent to young kids.On the one side,
this
message
 can empower
children
 to work hard for their dreams,
however
,it can be the reason for many mental and physical disasters.
To begin
 with, telling young races that if they are brave enough to chase their dreams and success in anything they want,it is kind of obvious that
this
message
make
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 them more confident and focused person in their adult lives.To cue evidence,when parents promise their
children
 if they get excellent score in their exam,they will buy them their favourite toy, they
are literally study
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 hard to get that and in my
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this
 makes them
focuse
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focus
focused
 on their tasks and
also
 responsible for their future.So encouraging
children
 make them feel they can be able to gain their goals
as a result
 of their endeavour.
On the other hand
,sending
this
message
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children
 might bring up opposite
effect
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,
such
 as mental health problems.
For instance
,each person has
it's
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its
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 own way to be successful and
this
 opinion will put too much pressure on them and if they do not succeed,they will think they are useless,not talented, stupid and so on.
Thus
,
this
 is literally harmful
for
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 their bodies and make them anxious and frustrated even in their future lives. In conclusion, every individual has to find the right balance, working hard is not always the answer,and if you do not
careful
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 about it,you will
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 in the near future.
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