*In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is lack of a sense of community.* *What are the causes of this problem?* *How can it be solved?*

Nowadays, a lot of countries consist of their own societies. In many suburbs, the number of individuals does not recognize their neighbourhoods increasingly and there is no interest in their
community
. In
this
essay, I will explain the reasons why
this
problem is occurring and suggest possible solutions.
To begin
with, it is evident that people are likely to work hard and cannot meet their neighbours.
This
is because they spend a lot of time without their house.
For example
, in Japan, they go to commit their workplace at 7 a.m. After that, they came back home at 9 p.m. As for
this
, they might not encounter their surroundings.
On the other hand
, when they take part in their
community
volunteer activities
such
as picking up the garbage,
community
festival, they are able to communicate with them.
Moreover
, individuals might avoid victims and arguments.
This
means that they do not want to be too involved in their society because they would like to stay there without a slight spectacle.
Thus
, they keep to have their personal space regardless they are possible to construct good relationships with them.
In contrast
, certain societies have to make certain communication systems.
For instance
, they held their meeting at least once a month or make a
community
note which post in each house and they can get the information about their area. To sum up, there are several reasons why lucking of connection with surroundings. Because they are less likely to get in tough and escape some problems in advance.
However
, it has possible resolutions in which they participate in activities aggressively and has a chance to learn about neighbourhoods.
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