Unemployment is one of the biggest problems of contemporary society. What do you think are the main causes of unemployment? What solutions can you suggest?

It is well known that joblessness is a situation which the majority of cities around the world are facing nowadays.
This
issue affects not only the community but
also
the government since the
problem
has a direct impact on the local economy. The biggest cause of
this
issue is because the employees are, most of the time, unprepared to accomplish the necessities of the labour market.
Thus
, in order to minimize these causes some improvements must be taken,
such
as practical
classes
for youth and vocational courses for
adults
.
To begin
with, one of the main reasons for the unemployment in big cities is because traditionally at schools the majority of
classes
are focused only on theoretical subjects rather than practices.
Consequently
, when the students graduate, they are not prepared to start working as they have never learned vocational skills as finance routine or how to treat customers. Another common reason for
this
problem
is the level of qualification or education of experienced workers, specific for people over 40 because some types of jobs do not exist anymore but others have been created in the
last
decade
such
as drone operators, uber drivers and app developer and despite the fact that the demand for jobs in these positions is increasing, employers are struggling to find skilled workers. A solution to
this
would be
instead
of academic
classes
, the schools propose for those who are interested in some practical
classes
.
Thus
, when the students graduate, they would have the minimum level of qualification to start working in companies or in commerce.
In addition
, the government or the companies should provide financial incentives for
adults
, who aim to work in specific areas
such
as, IT or social media, where there are more job opportunities than workers. To sum up, from my point of view, the most effective way to solve
this
problem
is through the education of adolescents and
adults
. For
adults
is essential to provide financial incentives because, they need to support their families while they learn a new profession, and for ,teenagers the best way is at schools by reducing the number of theoretical
classes
.
Also
, I believe that government and business should work together on
this
matter as
this
problem
affects the growth of the global economy.
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