It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
It is undeniable that goodness and badness is a part of life whether young people and adults and these affect their livelihood. So, pupils should be taught the distinction between correct and wrong
that is
vital in growing up to adults. Moreover
, a discipline when children make a mistake or doing
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For example
, poor children who do not have a sufficient opportunity in studying or do have parents
to teach them are the highest rates of crime in Thailand. Therefore
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Furthermore
, parents
and teachers must have an appropriate discipline in favour of management
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