Internet development has a great impact on people's life. Some people say social media do more harm to the youth. Other people say they do the great to youth. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Cutting-edge technology has changed
people
's Use synonyms
life
enormously. Social Use synonyms
media
, specifically, is now invading our daily routine, especially bringing a huge impact on teenagers' daily Use synonyms
life
. Some Use synonyms
people
firmly believe that Use synonyms
this
kind of communicating platform provokes various negative impacts on young Linking Words
people
's lives, whereas others insist that Use synonyms
this
is an applausive tool for Linking Words
teens
. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss both opinions, and prove why I opt for the latter side as my view.
On one hand, for those who strongly hold the opinion that any sort of social Use synonyms
media
will definitely bring negative impacts on teenagers' Use synonyms
life
, they must be thinking based on the following two reasons: Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
this
group of Linking Words
people
might think that excessive use of social Use synonyms
media
would distract young Use synonyms
people
's attention on their real-Use synonyms
life
issues, Use synonyms
such
as their study, their real friendship, and even their family Linking Words
life
in reality. Use synonyms
In other words
, they may think that Linking Words
teens
who spend so much time chatting with net friends might forget how to make real friends in Use synonyms
life
, and even worse, they may forget how to focus on their study business. Another reason for Use synonyms
this
group holding the view that social Linking Words
media
only bring defects into Use synonyms
teens
' Use synonyms
life
might be to do with health problems. Parents, Use synonyms
for example
, worry so much about their children's eye-sight issues. They advocate that those social apps on their kids' smartphones are the blames, because these apps drag their kids too much. In a word, the negative influence outweighs the positive one for Linking Words
this
group of Linking Words
people
in terms of social Use synonyms
media
usage.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, another crowd of Linking Words
people
, as well as I, are thinking more positively towards social platforms, and they believe that Use synonyms
such
kind of high-tech is a blessing for adolescents rather than a curse. The time-consuming problem is just a matter of self-disciplining cultivation. For us, it is not wise to give up a high effective communicational method simply because you cannot control your own time spent on the garget. Linking Words
Besides
, the eye-sight issue is Linking Words
also
just an illusion. There are tons of assisting devices nowadays specially designed for protecting your eyes from being hurt from the screen, and many terminal devices, like cellphones or iPad, are now Linking Words
also
providing soft-light screen protecting systems. Linking Words
Furthermore
, learning how to use social Linking Words
media
healthily can not only release youngsters' huge study pressure but Use synonyms
also
can assist them to acquire necessary skills of using the internet, which could be very beneficial for their Linking Words
further
academic career. Linking Words
Therefore
, taking advantage of the internet communicational platform can be a blessing for young Linking Words
people
.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
Linking Words
people
might worry about the defects that internet communication tools might bring to Use synonyms
teens
, like many of the others, I Use synonyms
also
strongly advocate its advantages over its disadvantages. As long as we can balance the good with the bad, social Linking Words
media
can become an effective tool for youth.Use synonyms
Submitted by Esther on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.