You stayed in a hotel and was not satisfaid wiyh the service. Write a letter to the hotel manager Why you chose thi hotel What problems did you face Tell the manager what to do

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Dear Mr Brown I hope

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letter will find you well and in good spirit. I heard that your hotel is the most modern and lovely hotel in the town. So, I stayed there.

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, now I am writing

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letter in order to register a complaint with you regarding the poor service that I experienced

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Monday. When I visited there, I was really disappointed with the service, and I hope you will take prompt action after investigating the letter. The first thing I would like to draw your attention

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the quality of the food. To tell the truth, the sweet for dessert was spoiled.

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, when I wanted to take a trip around the beach, your staff demanded fare for the bus,

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it was free in the contract. I regret to have been there, and will never visit.

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is a frustrating, and daunting experience that I have had with your hotel. Even though you should know how poor the affair is. I hope you will take it into consideration, and take

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to make it better. Yours sincerely Umurzoqova Z

uluga2002Mon Apr 14 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Try to organize your ideas more clearly in paragraphs, ensuring a single idea per paragraph for better flow.

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Be sure to proofread your letter for spelling and grammatical inaccuracies, such as 'satisfaid' and 'wiyh', to increase professionalism.

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The tone of the letter is polite and respectful, which is very important in formal correspondence.

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You clearly stated the issues you faced during your stay, making it easier for the manager to understand your complaints.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

186 words

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You stayed in a hotel and was not satisfaid wiyh the service. Write a letter to the hotel manager Why you chose thi hotel What problems did you face Tell the manager what to do

It is a good idea for people to continue working in an old age, if it is possible for them to do so. Do you agree or disagree?

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Write a letter to the admission tutor. In your letter explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day also ask how long the interview will be, and whether there will be any tests during it You should write at least 150 words.