5. A young person is going to spend his first day at the office next month. Write a letter to explain what he should do on his first day. In your letter, you should tell: – what work should be done in the company – what he/she will do on the first day of work – what items/objects he /she needs to take along.

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Dear John, I'm Janet, your direct manager. I am pleased to welcome you to join my team

month, so I would like to inform you before you start working.

First

of all, since ABC company is the leading technology consultant in Thailand, you have to learn and understand the technical terms. It would help you to communicate effectively with other teams. Another task that you should do is gathering requirements from clients and developing business requirements for trading applications which I will explain in more detail on your

first

day. Anyway, the

first

day of work will be a lot of funs. In the morning, Miss Pathai from the HR team will present our company's vision and mission. After that, I will show you where your desk is and talk to you about products under my team.

Lastly

, please do not forget to bring a lunch-box, since the canteen closed for two months.

Moreover

, it will take half an hour to buy some food at the nearest restaurant.

Thus

, I recommend you pack it by yourself. I look forward to seeing you. Cheers, Jenny

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

185 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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