Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today’s ,world humans confront environmental issues which
cause
a negative impact on our life. Despite the fact that there are varieties of natural difficulties, some people believe that the loss of the fauna and flora is more important than another dilemma. Generally ,speaking there are several environmental issues as well as each one plays important role in our society. The ruin of special plants can
cause
climate change in the future.
First
off, because all of the planets are connected to each other by interfering with
this
cycle nature face critical issues.
For example
, by fading a nature Carbon dioxide cannot be absorbed;
moreover
, it spears to the atmosphere and Oxygen could not release appropriately.
Additionally
, because of the survival chain in our ,
world
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it would be harmful to both animals and humans if they faced endangered.
For instance
, if birds extinct, the other animals do not have food for consumption.
On the other hand
, pollution is one of the critical threats to natural resources. By increasing in number car usage, most of the vehicles produce mono dioxide; meanwhile, it has an influence on the Ozone layer which plays the
first
role in global warming.
Similarly
, by overpopulation the governments have to sprawl urban; what’s more, the lands are destroyed by humankind to provide situations for their life. As an example, in the capital of our country, because of born ,rating the government build skyscraper for families and
cause
them to encroach the animal territories. To sum up, in my ,opinion both sides have special problems for our environmental life which
cause
important damage for our children.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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