Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievement and this sets a bad example to young people

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personality which was always a
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more controversial with many claiming that
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they are renowned only for their economy and look which lead to
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reject
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notion.I partially accord with the given notion and the upcoming paragraphs will shed the light on the points in profound
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. Analysing the statement and explaining
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there are numerous things against the provided statement,but the
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the hard phase of their lives in order to win
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state and as an outcome,being a
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person they not only
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by the teenagers but
also
their rules and regulations are followed by the youth to make themselves capable for
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this
theirs
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destinations
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.Another striking factor in
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a boost to
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the civilization
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of a nation along the worldwide is observed as well by the assist of celebrities.
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,a survey,which was monitored by the national youth congress of India,in 2020, found that from the inspiration of Manushi Chillar who won the
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of Miss world in 2019,the interest of girls from divergent backgrounds was increased by 70
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in case of
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. Probing ahead,one of the main underlying
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stems from the fact that due to the dearth of maturity,juveniles are more
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illegal activities,
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young children
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prefer
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weapons after watching the action movies.What is more,the acting standard talent of eminent pupils might be standard or below, but they make sensation to
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by showing their wealth and fancy lifestyle. To infer,
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to the deliberation aforementioned above,I reach on a
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conclusion
that
although
celebrities
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a crucial role,
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activities seems
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harmful
mainly for the young
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children
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