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You have just moved into a new house and are planning to hold party.you are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour .

#house #party #noise #neighbour
I hope you're doing great.
i
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 recently moved to your neighbourhood with my husband. I got a job here in a bank so I moved here. To celebrate our new house me and my husband decided to throw a celebration
next
 Sunday for our friends. I would really appreciate it if you can attend
this
party
. Our
party
 will start near 5pm and continues till 10pm.
First
, some brevegege will be served than I planned to order Italian and Indian food from nearby restaurants. After ,dinner there will be a dance
party
. We will make sure each and every guest will enjoy the
party
. I really appreciate
if
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 you're able to attend our
party
. In
this
 way, we'll get a chance to know each other. Looking to hearing from you.
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