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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspaper. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

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Many
people
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 have been keen on recycling
waste
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 materials,
such
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 as bottles and newspapers, as
it
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they
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 can reduce the impact on the environment.
However
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, some groups do not recycle their
waste
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.
This
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 essay will discuss why some
people
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 do that and how it can be solved. There are many reasons for not recycling
waste
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.
First
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 of all, some
people
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 do not know what types of
waste
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 should be in recycle bins, so they put it all together in a
bin
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. Sometimes, when they try to do it correctly, it fails.
For example
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, they put bottles in a general
bin
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 which service providers send everything to a landfill, and do not recycle it. It is
also
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 convenient to put it in the same
bin
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 without thinking about which
bin
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 should be put even though they know the importance of recycling. You can see obviously that someone who is unwilling to recycle still do the same thing. To encourage
people
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 to recycle
waste
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, the government should educate children at an early age. When they repeat something, they are more likely to do it in the future. Official officers can
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 give information via the internet and posters in many places,
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 as
subway
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the subway
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 and sky train.
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, they may enforce the law for some groups who intend to do what they usually do. If they do not recycle
waste
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 materials, they must pay a great deal of money. To sum up, some
people
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 have no ideas to recycle due to lack of knowledge and some habits. If they get the information and are forced to do it, they will do appropriate things.
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