In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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HIGHER STUDIES STUDENTS ARE REFERRED EITHER
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WORK OR TRAVEL TO ANOTHER AREA
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THE UNIVERSITY.
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PROPERLY. ON THE ONE HAND, VISITING ANOTHER PLACE IS
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WAY FOR LEARNING ABOUT
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CULTERS
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CASE YOUNG PEOPLE ABLE TO SPEND THEIR TIME WITH CRUCIAL PURPOSE
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MAY CAUSE THEIR
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, WORKING FOR A YEAR AFTER HIGHER STUDIES IS USEFUL FOR THEM FINISHING THE CAMPUS IN ORDER TO
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CAN BE WORKING
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EXPERIENCE
OF THEIR FUTURE EMPLOYMENT AND LEAD THEM MAKING
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OF
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MAY IMPACT ON THE STUDY. THERE ARE MORE CHANCES TO GIVE UP THE EDUCATION PERIOD CAUSE OF GAPPING. DUE TO
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ISSUE THEY MAY HAVE LESS
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PLAN AND WORSEN
THIRE
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, THERE ARE SOME
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BENEFITS
OF SPENDING THE GAP OF STUDIES AMONG THE CHILDREN MAY BETTER RESULT FOR THE FUTURE AT THE SAME TIME THERE ARE MORE
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TO GIVE UP THEIR
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STUDIES
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MUST GIVE PROPER
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FOR THEIR JUNG CHILDREN FOR MAKING BETTER LIVES.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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