Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Other say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In today's world of globalisation, many
people
say learning a
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foreign
language
is required in order to travel or for
work
in
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foreign
countries.
However
, there are
people
who say that there are many other reasons for which
one
should learn a
language
. In my opinion for someone, to stand different in the crowd as having
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expertise over more foreign languages is an art which
one
should learn.
For instance
, a person who loves travelling to
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place
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and
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new
people
, understanding and developing fluency in a
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foreign
language
is a boon.
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it helps in getting to know to a foreign culture and their lifestyle more closely. Nowadays,
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tourists
prefer to stay in hostels/homestay so as to mingle with locals. Whereas for a person to develop expertise in a
language
different than his/her mother tongue for
work
purpose is merely a
neccessity
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necessity
for survival.
This
shall help them to
work
in a foreign country At the same time, many learn different languages and dialects just to connect with different
people
around the world to experience
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culture
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cultures
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. Many
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psychologist
physiologist
study
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the behaviours and gestures made in
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foreign
languages to study
comfortability
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of ones in their own speech.
However
, learning a
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foreign
language
is an art
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is very difficult to achieve. It teaches
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patience
, determination and helps develop confidence. To
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conclude
, in my opinion,
work
or
travel related
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reasons for learning the
foriegn
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foreign
language
are not the only reasons. Each
one
should learn
atleast
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at least
one
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foreign
langauge
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language
so as to understand their grasping skills and to connect with more
people
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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