It is often said that governments spend too much mo ey on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems. That are more important? Do you agree or disagree?

Many countries allocate large budgets to preserving wild nature ,
although
there are some people who disagree, I strongly agree that
this
protection is necessary and I will explain more details in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, the protection of flora and fauna by authorities is important due to the crucial role of every single part of it in the ecosystem. Without balanced and healthy living nature there will be several consequences for humankind, and to maintain a healthy ecological balance on
this
earth, all living creatures should be protected. 
For example
, If a single species would become extinct, the whole food chain is disrupted and it can affect humans on the top of
this
chain.
On the other hand
,
although
there are several problems that need to be addressed, protecting
wildlife
is necessary to solve a lot of men made problems.The major factor that can repair the human effect on the planet is
wildlife
. Humankind activities have led to some phenomena
such
as climate change and  global warming, and the only major factor which can negate the consequences is
wildlife
.
For instance
, the huge amount of emitted carbon dioxide never would be disappeared unless photosynthesis in the forest.
Hence
we have to protect
wildlife
first
for ourselves,
second
for negating our impact on the planet. In conclusion,
although
there are some who believe spending a huge amount of money to protect
wildlife
is unnecessary, and it is better to spend
this
money on other issues. Due to some important 
reasons
Add a comma
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I think
this
protection is important and should be continued
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • conservation
  • eco-tourism
  • interconnected issues
  • misallocation of resources
  • intrinsically valuable
  • sustainable development
  • biodiversity hotspot
  • environmental stewardship
  • habitat preservation
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