Some people think that a good diet and exercise are not necessary for health and long life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

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life

, there is no

time

to check

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nutrients amount in their daily diet. Some

advogate

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advocate

advocates

that there is no need to worry about it because healthy meal and daily exercise

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not crucial while others have a contrast opinion about it. I support, from my view that dietary food and

everday

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everyday

workout are mandatory to living a prosperous

life

.

This

essay will

eloborate

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elaborate

my stance with

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examples.

First

of all,

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are two main ideas which substantiate my statement.

First

, nowadays people are running behind

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and money. They

are not give

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much importance to what going in their

life

.

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, to save

time

majority of workers

eating

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junk foods from outside

vendours

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vendors

which is purely

unhygenic

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unhygienic

hygienic

.

Secondly

, They did not schedule some

time

for

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physical activity in their daily routine.

Obiviously

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Obviously

, they are working

fulltime

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without rest to earn more money. Eventually, because of

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reasons

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they will end up in

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sedentary

sedendary

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lifestyle

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life style

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.

As a

result

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they are

under

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high risk of major health complications

such

as cardiac arrest.

Moreover

, in recent times there are plenty of fake advertisements and false promises

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this

condition more worst. Some business organizations

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non verified

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and unproven

statement

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to cover their customers.

Consumors

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Consumers

are believing their words without thought.

For instance

, companies selling some food items that will give energy

such

as coke and

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.

Simultaniously

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they are concealing the

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of carbohydrates in it which

so

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dangerous to our body system.

Additionally

, some retailers

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that if you drink or eat our product within a week you will

lost

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lose

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five kilograms which is

utterly

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untrue and unsafe method Because without exercise we can not lose

weights

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. To conclude, From my perspective, I believe that

balanced

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diet and exercises are essential in our

life

. without a doubt, it will keep physically fit and mentally stable.