Some people think that a good diet and exercise are not necessary for health and long life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
fast paced
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fast-paced
life
, there is no time
to check their
nutrients amount in their daily diet. Some Change the word
the
advogate
that there is no need to worry about it because healthy meal and daily exercise Correct your spelling
advocate
advocates
is
not crucial while others have a contrast opinion about it. I support, from my view that dietary food and Change the verb form
are
everday
workout are mandatory to living a prosperous Correct your spelling
everyday
life
. This
essay will eloborate
my stance with Correct your spelling
elaborate
relevent
examples.
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relevant
First
of all, There
are two main ideas which substantiate my statement. Correct your spelling
there
First
, nowadays people are running behind time
and money. They Change preposition
on time
are not give
much importance to what going in their Change the verb form
are not given
are not giving
life
. For example
, to save time
majority of workers eating
junk foods from outside Wrong verb form
eat
vendours
which is purely Correct your spelling
vendors
unhygenic
. Correct your spelling
unhygienic
hygienic
Secondly
, They did not schedule some time
for a
physical activity in their daily routine. Remove the article
apply
Obiviously
, they are working Correct your spelling
Obviously
fulltime
without rest to earn more money. Eventually, because of Correct your spelling
full-time
this
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these
reasons
they will end up in Add a comma
,reasons
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sedentary
sedendary
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a sedendary
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lifestyle
life style
. Correct your spelling
lifestyle
As a
result
they are Add a comma
,result
under
high risk of major health complications Change preposition
at
such
as cardiac arrest.
Moreover
, in recent times there are plenty of fake advertisements and false promises made
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that made
this
condition more worst. Some business organizations giving
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give
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a non
non verified
and unproven Add a hyphen
non-verified
statement
to cover their customers. Fix the agreement mistake
statements
Consumors
are believing their words without thought. Correct your spelling
Consumers
For instance
, companies selling some food items that will give energy such
as coke and pepsi
. Change the capitalization
Pepsi
Simultaniously
they are concealing the Correct your spelling
Simultaneously
amount
of carbohydrates in it which Change the quantifier
number
so
dangerous to our body system. Add a missing verb
is so
Additionally
, some retailers proclaiming
that if you drink or eat our product within a week you will Wrong verb form
proclaim
lost
five kilograms which is Change the verb form
lose
be lost
utterly
untrue and unsafe method Because without exercise we can not lose Correct article usage
an utterly
weights
.
To conclude, From my perspective, I believe that Fix the agreement mistake
weight
balanced
diet and exercises are essential in our Correct article usage
a balanced
life
. without a doubt, it will keep physically fit and mentally stable.Submitted by thilaga.pt88 on
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