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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, some
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 are going away from communication each year. It is considered that there is no importance of numerous
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existence
 yet the smaller number, the easier life. In my opinion, I agree that globalization
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one
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would ease people`s life.
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, every
community
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 should keep in mind that
language
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 is a reflection of culture. Personally, I think that If
community
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 talk with each other only in a few
languages
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 than it would be
convinient
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convenient
 and comfortable for each other.
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, if the individual
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that is
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 widespread all over the world
then
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 there would be more
opporunity
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opportunity
 to disclose new places or to get acquainted with people from other nation. Since
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 mainly
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 barrier serves as a block.
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,
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a community
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community
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communities
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 who know
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 of another place inspire them to travel and to gain confidence.
Nonetheless
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,
on the other hand
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, I disagree because each country has
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its own
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 history,
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 and traditions that
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 on culture. If one of these disappeared, it means that as a whole,
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 of vanishing the nation would be near.
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,
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transmission
transmition
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the transmition
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 of
language
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 from generation to generation means that the future kids would be in touch with the ancients.
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, no other thing does not boost interest
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 the country as a
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. In
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,
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 helps to preserve
identity
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the identity
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 of each country. The Earth is unique due to
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diversity while every place has
own
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its own
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pecularities
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peculiarities
 the life becomes colourful. The core point that should be taken into consideration is that the easy way
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 every time is right. Perhaps,
community
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 with the government need to work in
oder
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order
 to broadcast and interest other nations as it was done with English.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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