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Children can learn effectively through watching TV. Therefore children should be encouraged to watch TV regularly both at home and at school. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Children
 learn from different things by new technology. Some people believe that when
children
 watch the
TV
, they can learn more effective,
therefore
 they want to encourage other people to prepare better conditions for their
children
 to watch
TV
 during school or when they are staying at home.
To begin
 with, Nowadays by spreading new technology
such
 as
TV
 and computers or the internet;
children
 can learn faster than who were living in the past.
In addition
, when they want to know about a majority of new information or relate to their courses, they can use their phones or
TV
 or etc. When
children
 use their television in their houses can achieve a new approach of techniques for learning, whereas their parents are thinking about the bad effects of
TV
 on their minds.
Finally
, their
children
 can not focus on their subjects and courses carefully.
Secondly
, some experts and scientists have believed that new technology
such
 as
TV
 or watching
TV
 can improve childrens' imagination ability. When
children
 watch
TV
, they can learn new things related to their life and benefit their future.
Furthermore
, I disagree with
this
 theory, cause when
children
 watch
TV
 more than normal during a week their brain will be closed and they can not think about immediately working or something like that. I believe that their parents should encourage their
children
 to read books and use their cell phones for their courses. To conclude
this
 essay, I would prefer to consider that
children
 might have a timetable for their daily work.
First
 of all, they have to focus on their study and equally they have permission to watch
TV
.
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