some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

For some time now it has been a growing debate that some people advocate that the vital issue of our generation is losing some rare species of plants and animals while others have a counter-argument that there are more other environmental issues that we should have a close

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of all,

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are two main reasons to substantiate my perspective

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this

statement.

Firstly

, from the big bang incident,

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earth has been in a

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continuous

change. From the day of evolution, numerous living

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organisms

have been evolving from one stage to another. Simultaneously,

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only can survive

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date.

As a result

, various new

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and vanishing of life were encountered by mankind.

Second

, scientists and researchers

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on

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about some predominant issues

such

as global warming, land erosion, air and, water pollution. Particularly, if

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neglect the truth about

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temperature of the globe

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they might face massive catastrophic effects.

On the other hand

, It can not be denied that people should protect all endangered species. Because every single animal is participating

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work to run

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world and it is mandatory in foodchain

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hierarchy

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For example

, there are many proven studies

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acknowledged

that 60% of global

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vegetation

are done by bees. Wild bees highly

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to

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pollination

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of flowers.

Obviuosly

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if we did not preserve bees

then

it will be

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huge destruction in the

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of new plants. To conclude, I believe since other animals and plants have been part of

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world family, humans have

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responsibility

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to secure their habitation.

Nevertheless

, some elements are more crucial for all living

this

to survive as air and water. People should give extra

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precaution

precautions

on it to maintain

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of the universe.