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- Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is suggested that the most prominent source of
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 for a large population is newspapers while some believe that it is the internet. In
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, it is evident that the technology available today has replaced many conventional methods of doing things
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 as shopping, paying bills, learning, and many more. As people became more time conscious to cope with ever-growing markets and trends, they are finding it hard to schedule a time to keep themselves updated with the latest information.
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, they are relying solely on online
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 which gets updated instantaneously compared to physical newspapers which often has to be prepared at least half a day in advance that which makes the idea of updated information null and void. One of the greatest advantages to online
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 is that it can be read on almost any device
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 as the most common smartphone, thereby making it highly accessible to all the population. While some individuals prefer to have a physical copy of a newspaper to satiate their hunger for
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, it may not always be comfortable to carry and spread it around when one feels like reading it. Despite the sense of
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stability
, there are many disadvantages to physical tabloids
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 as printing the information and selling it takes time during which more or contradicting
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 is being created which might make the already printed stories completely invalid. As countries around the world became more environmentally aware of sustainable practices, using paper to publish reports is found to be a bad idea because once the
news
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 is read paper is often discarded. In conclusion, I believe that the newspapers though already are available very less in number are soon going to become completely scarce.
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, I completely disagree with the aforementioned suggestion.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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