Some people think that hosting international sports events may be beneficial for a country. Discuss both views.

The importance of sports is increasing day by day as it is noticed that a vast number of people are travelling to different countries. Hosting a

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event may have an advantage to the

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as many athletes are keen to know the culture of that

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but, there should be a

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and well strategic security protection designed by the government

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are promoting these events.

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different

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country

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is having different rich cultures and the main importance of the government should be to promote

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culture.

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, In India when a guest arrives, they are welcomed with flowers and an aarti. Aarti is a Hindu ceremony in which

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people believe that all the negativities are destroyed by

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process. People watching at home would get inspired

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the culture and would spot the travelling places of that

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, which would be beneficial for the hosting

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because tourism would increase.

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, hosting sports events are too costly because there are many facilities provided to the athletes as well as the guests arriving

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the

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should be designed

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that all the spendings should fall under these projected expenses. The

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should consist of all the single expense which has to be paid by the

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, security should be kept at all the points in the area where these events are held.

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sometimes can promote crime in that area as police are busy

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securing the event place and not the residency. To sum up, there are benefits for the

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in hosting the international sports event, but lack of security for citizens and unhandled expenses would result in

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big disadvantage for the

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