Developments on science and technology have caused environmental problems. Some people think that a simpler way of life will protect the environment, while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A large
amount
of environmental issues have been produced by the rapid growth Change the quantifier
number
on
Change preposition
of
science
and technology
.Although
leading simpler lives would benefit the surroundings,compared with the civilization and economics of the society,we still need to pay more attention on
the developments Change the preposition
to
on
Change preposition
in
science
and technology
in the long term.
The air,the sun,the water,forests,plants and all the other creatures on earth are important to human beings.Not only because we ourselves need to breath
,eat,drink and keep our living Replace the word
breathe
enviroment
in balance,but Correct your spelling
environment
also
we must leave something good to our kids.In order to achieve the goals,the easiest way is Change preposition
to live
live
as simple as possible,Replace the word
life
such
as,save water by recycling use;keep
Wrong verb form
keeping
air
fresh by travelling Correct article usage
the air
in
Change preposition
on
Add an article
a bicycle
the bicycle
bicycle
or public Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
vehicals
,etc.
Correct your spelling
vehicles
vehicle
However
,such
simple lives can not satisfy people's demand
and catch up with the development Fix the agreement mistake
demands
on
Change preposition
of
science
and technology
.So it is more important to enhance science
and technology
which put the society and civilization going forward consistantly
.For Correct your spelling
consistently
constantly
instant
,one of the greatest Add an article
an instant
technology
that benefit
our life is the invention of Change the verb form
benefits
vehicals
,which give us a larger view Correct your spelling
vehicles
in
places of daily life and bring more Change preposition
of
convenient
in getting things that we want.But,Replace the word
convenience
on the other hand
,emissions from driving vehicals
Correct your spelling
vehicles
also
cause air pollution.To solve the problem,depending on science
and technology
skill
,people created Fix the agreement mistake
skills
a
new Remove the article
apply
clear
energy to replace the gas and petrol consumed by Correct your spelling
clean
vehicals
.Another advantage we take from the development Correct your spelling
vehicles
on
Change preposition
of
science
and technology
is the emergy
of Correct your spelling
energy
battery
.They have been widely used in the Fix the agreement mistake
batteries
equipments
that need power-electric bicycles,medical Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
equipments
,watches,computers and cellphones.And a lot of dumped batteries damaged the soil and water Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
undergroud
.So the scientists make a kind of battery without the poison chemical part Correct your spelling
underground
instead
of the formal one in recent years.
In conclusion, the best way to keep the progress of development on science
and technology
is reduce
their pollutions.If we put more Change the verb form
to reduce
reducing
efforts
Fix the agreement mistake
effort
on
researching methods to limit the disadvantages,we and our kids would lead happy lives for a long time.Change preposition
into
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