Developments on science and technology have caused environmental problems. Some people think that a simpler way of life will protect the environment, while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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of environmental issues have been produced by the rapid growth
on
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science
and
technology
.
Although
leading simpler lives would benefit the surroundings,compared with the civilization and economics of the society,we still need to pay more attention
on
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the developments
on
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science
and
technology
in the long term. The air,the sun,the water,forests,plants and all the other creatures on earth are important to human beings.Not only because we ourselves need to
breath
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,eat,drink and keep our living
enviroment
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environment
in balance,but
also
we must leave something good to our kids.In order to achieve the goals,the easiest way is
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live
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as simple as possible,
such
as,save water by recycling use;
keep
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air
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fresh by travelling
in
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a bicycle
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bicycle
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bicycles
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or public
vehicals
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vehicles
vehicle
,etc.
However
,
such
simple lives can not satisfy people's
demand
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and catch up with the development
on
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science
and
technology
.So it is more important to enhance
science
and
technology
which put the society and civilization going forward
consistantly
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consistently
constantly
.For
instant
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,one of the greatest
technology
that
benefit
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our life is the invention of
vehicals
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vehicles
,which give us a larger view
in
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places of daily life and bring more
convenient
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in getting things that we want.But,
on the other hand
,emissions from driving
vehicals
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vehicles
also
cause air pollution.To solve the problem,depending on
science
and
technology
skill
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,people created
a
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new
clear
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clean
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energy to replace the gas and petrol consumed by
vehicals
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vehicles
.Another advantage we take from the development
on
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science
and
technology
is the
emergy
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energy
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of
battery
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batteries
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.They have been widely used in the
equipments
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equipment
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that need power-electric bicycles,medical
equipments
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,watches,computers and cellphones.And a lot of dumped batteries damaged the soil and water
undergroud
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underground
.So the scientists make a kind of battery without the poison chemical part
instead
of the formal one in recent years. In conclusion, the best way to keep the progress of development on
science
and
technology
is
reduce
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to reduce
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their pollutions.If we put more
efforts
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on
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researching methods to limit the disadvantages,we and our kids would lead happy lives for a long time.
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