Developments on science and technology have caused environmental problems. Some people think that a simpler way of life will protect the environment, while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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of environmental issues have been produced by the rapid growth

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science

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leading simpler lives would benefit the surroundings,compared with the civilization and economics of the society,we still need to pay more attention

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the developments

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science

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in the long term. The air,the sun,the water,forests,plants and all the other creatures on earth are important to human beings.Not only because we ourselves need to

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,eat,drink and keep our living

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environment

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we must leave something good to our kids.In order to achieve the goals,the easiest way is

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live

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as simple as possible,

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as,save water by recycling use;

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air

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fresh by travelling

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a bicycle

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bicycle

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or public

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vehicles

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,etc.

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simple lives can not satisfy people's

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and catch up with the development

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science

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.So it is more important to enhance

science

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which put the society and civilization going forward

consistantly

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consistently

constantly

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instant

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,one of the greatest

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benefit

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our life is the invention of

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vehicals

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vehicles

,which give us a larger view

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places of daily life and bring more

convenient

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in getting things that we want.But,

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,emissions from driving

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vehicals

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vehicles

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cause air pollution.To solve the problem,depending on

science

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skill

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,people created

a

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new

clear

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energy to replace the gas and petrol consumed by

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vehicles

.Another advantage we take from the development

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science

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is the

emergy

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of

battery

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.They have been widely used in the

equipments

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that need power-electric bicycles,medical

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,watches,computers and cellphones.And a lot of dumped batteries damaged the soil and water

undergroud

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underground

.So the scientists make a kind of battery without the poison chemical part

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of the formal one in recent years. In conclusion, the best way to keep the progress of development on

science

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and

technology

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is

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to reduce

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their pollutions.If we put more

efforts

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on

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researching methods to limit the disadvantages,we and our kids would lead happy lives for a long time.