the maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now and plans for its development

the maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now and plans for its development
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,
it is clear that
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the plan is to extend the
centre
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and its car park into nearby green space to allow for more stores and a greater focus on
fashin
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fashion
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at the expense of eateries and space for activities. Currently, southside
mall
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consists of only a supermarket, department store,
cenima
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cinema
, a noodle shop, café with a children’s play area, and toilet facilities. To the east of the
centre
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, there is a golf course that backs on the park,
while
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the
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south, there is a fitness
centre
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and a carpark opposite the
mall
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entrance
According to
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the proposal, only the supermarket, toilets, and entrance will remain
from
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the original site. The most significant development will be the extension of the
mall
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in an easterly direction, where it will overtake land previously occupied by the golf course and park. The fitness
centre
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too will be demolished to make way for the carpark which will more than double in size. Inside, the
mall
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itself,
although
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the proposed renovation will allow for more stores, including fashion boutiques and shoe stores, the department store will remain, increasing in size and acquiring its own entrance. A cosmetics and gift shop will be added,
as well as
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, a beauty salon. There will,
however
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, be nowhere to eat as plans show the café will become an information
centre
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.
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