Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “Children nowadays have too much freedom.”

These days many people believe that the new generation of

children

are having more

freedom

than they should, and look at it as a flaw.

On the other hand

, some individuals believe that not only does

freedom

help

children

to develop, but

also

motivates them to obtain their independence. Most of the people, who are complaining about how much a kid should have

freedom

, did not have it when they were a child, so they think

this

kind of

freedom

can hurt

children

.

For instance

, a man

that is

in his late fifties might think going to another city for a kid while he is alone is dangerous because when he was at that age, travelling alone was dangerous. Most of the time when someone is arguing about

children

's

freedom

is because of their unawareness. If

children

have

freedom

in different aspects of their lives, they start to learn how to choose the right thing in their lives. Even Sometimes they might choose the wrong thing but with enough help from their

parents

, they can learn how to find the difference between the wrong and right choices. What

parents

should do for their

children

is help them to be able to recognize good and bad and not limit their choice by dictating them.

For example

, when a person’s child is thinking about how to continue his study in high school,

parents

should help him to find his interest. Never should

parents

choose on behalf of that child. To sum up, everything has been stated so far, these days

children

have a lot more

freedom

than before, but

this

freedom

is not harming their lives. It can even make the

next

generation more responsible

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because they learn every choice comes with consequences. The vital thing is

parents

must always help their

children

to make decisions wisely not make them do something.